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Oh, The Life
Born into the world, crying
Drawing with chalk, smiling
Holding a steady hand, laughing
Studying at midnight, sighing
Gazing through windows, dreaming
Sitting on rooftops, smoking
Drinking out of strange cups, choking
Looking at unfamiliar faces, panicking
Grasping shaky hands, fumbling
Attending foggy concerts, singing
Seeing everything you had, crying
Feeling strange pills, swallowing
Letting go slowly, falling
Waking up, carrying on.
Making it.
Living.
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