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The Stream
of debts and obligations
our lives are lead by,
hopes and aspiration
of others,which we abide by,
of sacrifices and resignations
for others who for us cry,
each live in a world of their own creation
playing the play's suited to each one's imagination
creation,manifestation,narration
crossing the bridge with pure devotion
and faith in the Self and the Self's intention,
and yet
sometimes
of debts and obligations
our lives are lead by,
hopes and aspiration
of others, for which we choose to abide by.
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