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These wind's were too harsh for the hopeful
And I know that you like me today
Your seems weren’t stitched anyway
You fell apart at the scene
A sour sip from my lush lips
So please go back….
Before blood cells pixelate and leave
Your body and create this theme
A motion picture so saddening
And I know that you like me today
You just weren’t right anyway
You try to plug your heart’s bleeding
My eye’s set to achieve this feeling
So I could knock you out with a feather
As I grip you so vastly
As I spin you so hastily
You....
The wind whipped girl who never knew
To trust a lion is to trust a mew
You cried wolf, disintegration view
Of the crumbling girl who never knew
What it was like to be nothing…
But a use
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