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Gravity of Weightlessness
When a pen weighs a thousand tons
When a thought can’t leave the ground-
When invisible walls block the sun
Pushing screaming silent sound-
When despair is raging steep
Shouting with ‘ere a peep
Pounding in and hemming tight-
Relief found only in blackest night.
When the mind at last lets loose the day
The deepest me romps and plays,
But alas, with no recourse
Daylight finds pushes intrudes with force-
The worldly cares (Oh, what despair!)
Hone with pinpoint flair-
Gone the dreams, the fields green
No more the joys of my boy-
Laughter freedom sun and mirth
Stillborn in the days rebirth
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