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Dreaming Eyes
Dreaming Eyes
I would sail on a bright lit wind,
My heart dancing through the sun,
Filling my soul with light,
My love afire with words,
Burning, joining into her fire
To kiss her beautiful wanton eyes
I would sail on a bonfire wind,
Burning my soul to ash, my love
To falling blackened snow,
Drifting with a candle’s flickering,
Gently down the light
Into her cold angelic eyes
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