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Rhyme Jr.
On this earth lives a family in this spot
Just two tiny lives, no bigger than a dot
Here, in a place, where everything is awesome
*Huge grin* ...Your first smiley face picture...awe, son.
I got sidetracked, what was your question again?
Umm, say what. "Am I trained in the art of zen?"
Son; I must be excused, you have me confused
I don't know my taekwondo from Ninjago
I'm sorry, what. "Do I prefer Kai, or Zane?"
Who are they. I grew up on Batman and Bane
"Who is stronger?" Charizard, or Pikachu-
What on earth? How much does that cost...Pikawho?
Oh my. A list for Santa, started so soon?
It's only Boxing day, and it's barely noon...
Well, you have a lot of being good to do
Pardon me? Okay smarty pants. I do, too.
Dear God. "Where do babies come from?"
"Charlie said I came out your bum".
"When can I try a piece of gum?"
But...Mom. Mom. Mom. Mom. Mom. Mom. Mom.
**Author's note: This is my first poem attempt with my son. He is a rhyme and poetry lover like me. I asked for some words and themes to work with. He gave me:
Words: spot/dot, Zane/Bane, Charlie, Batman, taekwondo
Themes: Lego, Pokemon, "us", drawing pictures, "ask a question".
Thanks for the inspiration, big dude.
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