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Painting in New Colors
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:50:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am hideously beige
I’ve wallowed in the grey
I just seem to fade with age
I need to be brave today
I need a dose of green
I want to see colors true
I will admit, it does seem
I’ve at least known blue
I want to learn of red
I will throw it on a wall
I may fear what lies ahead
I do, though, want it all
I will scribble in yellow
I’ll paint a purple picture
I erase beige without sorrow
I need a new color mixture
I begin with colors dark
I’ll work my way to light
I’ll find orange as I embark
I see less black and white
I’ll create sunsets in peach
I’ll dabble with silver and gold
I do think they are within reach
I just hope I’m not too old
I will boldly try colors anew
I am done with living dull
I long to paint in different hues
I shall fill my palette full
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:16:14 PM AEST
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| Well expressed, well written |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by Soulless on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:17:10 PM AEST
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Astounding poem. This whole piece is a beautiful and well thought out metaphore. I absolutely love your writing style and technique
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:03:10 PM AEST
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this is such a beautiful poem!!
i wish you good luck on your way. |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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| WOW, this is a great write!! I understanding what your saying here. you write so smootly, and yet you put the message right where it needs to be. beautiful.....A++++++ |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:05:01 PM AEST
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| great write. it flowed so well. |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:41:55 PM AEST
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This is my kind of write my friend and I loved it. Great flow and rhymes made this a work of poetic art.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:25:05 PM AEST
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Very strong link here. It was quite conducive with the rich sense of colour and texture you 'painted'.
Extremely well done. |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:46:21 PM AEST
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This is brilliant! Load that palatte down with beautiful color and just submerse yourself in it.
Rita |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by Kie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:51:31 PM AEST
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First let me say WOW.
This was expertly executed. Each line complimented the other the rhyming was right on the mark.
The title summarized the poem. It is and was excellent.
I'm astounded with this one and can't praise it high enough.
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:09:39 PM AEST
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Wonderful, just wonderful.
I absolutely love poems with symbolic colours. |
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Re: Painting in New Colors
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 09:07:04 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write. So very expressive, and an inventive way of saying how you feel. We demonstrate such a broad spectum of emotions, this captures it so well. |
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