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TAKE MY HAND ILL SHOW YOU THE WAY
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I’m trying to take your hand
I’m trying to show you I am going to change
I’m walking down this rode hoping you well come
I’m hoping your hand well take mine on this walk
I’m hoping you can see that my words are true
I know they don’t mean much now but give me a bit
I’ll show you how it ought to be with you and me
I’ll show you that the love is still there
I’ll show you that my feelings are no longer blurry
I mine what I’m saying
I’m trying to show you that I mean no more pain
just smiles and laughter is all I want
so as days go by I’ll show you that my words are true
that everything I’m doing is for me and you
for the love that is still there
I know it may take time
then it well start to grow more and more
so I hope you can see that my word are not just word but more
for I want no more pain to come to us just smiles and laughter is all I want.
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Re: TAKE MY HAND ILL SHOW YOU THE WAY
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by Solnubis on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:00:56 PM AEST
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| I was told this one time that when we want to change just do it. The person who loves you with see it for themselves and then they will know you mean business. The only one who can change you is you. You are the power of example. And when your love sees you changing if your love was meant to be it will be. Then as you hold out your hand she or he will embrace it. Got alot from your poem. |
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Re: TAKE MY HAND ILL SHOW YOU THE WAY
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by AnastasiaN on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:05:41 AM AEST
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| what that guy said...i couldn't have said it better...what do you think brad? if it was meant to be...then you will do what needs to be done and everything will fall into place. love you xoxo |
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Re: TAKE MY HAND ILL SHOW YOU THE WAY
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by pureheart07 on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:40:56 AM AEST
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| Your poem is good, butit dose need more wrok try a revision they help alot Iook alot at my past wrok & i read it seeing where I could make it sound better & clearer of my point. |
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Re: TAKE MY HAND ILL SHOW YOU THE WAY
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by pureheart07 on
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| Your poem is good, butit dose need more wrok try a revision they help alot Iook alot at my past wrok & i read it seeing where I could make it sound better & clearer of my point. |
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