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We fell in love We fell in love
It was so perfect
Never once thought of
"If it was really worth it"
Boquets of red roses
Head full of dreams
We could part water like moses
And we were only teens
Thats what love does
Takes the worries away
Atleast thats how it was
Up until today
Now that dream is a nightmare
And those red roses fade to black
The words of truth are so very rare
An love is now something we are forced to act
You were a hero turned villian over night
Couldnt see it coming
I was left in the dark with no light
Blinded completly like it was nothing
You decieved me
And I pretended not to notice
Did you ever need me?
Did you always know this?
Useless questions ...I know
You wont reply
Hell...You've already let go
So why even cry?
I'm speachless
You really did fool me this time
I admit it...I didn't see this
There was no sign
All of those women
And not once did I suspect
This life that I was living
With so much neglect
Tears on my face
Washing away my dignity
The love has been erased
Look what you have givin me
A once beautiful song
Now a scratched CD
The tunes is all wrong
It no longer plays for me
I cannot breath
Because my sadness drowns me
I cannot leave
Your lies have bound me
I am trapped
Cease this pain
Its torn me in half
Like a crashed plane
We fell in love
But for what
I was to young to think of
Those four letters
I guess I have bad luck
Trapped in your lies
I cry and plea
These things I cannot handle
Afraid to say goodbye
Just Living in a static T.V
With no remote to change the channel
We fell out of love
But I am still here
What am I dreaming of
Thinking this old love will appear

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We fell in love<br />
It was so perfect<br />
Never once thought of<br />
"If it was really worth it"<br />
Boquets of red roses<br />
Head full of dreams<br />
We could part water like moses<br />
And we were only teens<br />
Thats what love does<br />
Takes the worries away<br />
Atleast thats how it was<br />
Up until today<br />
Now that dream is a nightmare<br />
And those red roses fade to black<br />
The words of truth are so very rare<br />
An love is now something we are forced to act<br />
You were a hero turned villian over night<br />
Couldnt see it coming<br />
I was left in the dark with no light<br />
Blinded completly like it was nothing<br />
You decieved me<br />
And I pretended not to notice<br />
Did you ever need me?<br />
Did you always know this?<br />
Useless questions ...I know<br />
You wont reply<br />
Hell...You've already let go<br />
So why even cry?<br />
I'm speachless<br />
You really did fool me this time<br />
I admit it...I didn't see this<br />
There was no sign<br />
All of those women<br />
And not once did I suspect<br />
This life that I was living<br />
With so much neglect<br />
Tears on my face<br />
Washing away my dignity<br />
The love has been erased<br />
Look what you have givin me<br />
A once beautiful song<br />
Now a scratched CD<br />
The tunes is all wrong<br />
It no longer plays for me<br />
I cannot breath<br />
Because my sadness drowns me<br />
I cannot leave<br />
Your lies have bound me<br />
I am trapped<br />
Cease this pain<br />
Its torn me in half<br />
Like a crashed plane<br />
We fell in love<br />
But for what<br />
I was to young to think of<br />
Those four letters<br />
I guess I have bad luck<br />
Trapped in your lies<br />
I cry and plea<br />
These things I cannot handle<br />
Afraid to say goodbye<br />
Just Living in a static T.V <br />
With no remote to change the channel<br />
We fell out of love<br />
But I am still here<br />
What am I dreaming of<br />
Thinking this old love will appear<br />
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