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The Removal (the mountain)
Upon entering, I saw a great mountain, and I knew it to be love.
As I neared the great, rusted gate leading to the mountains path, I saw an old man removing a great plaque, reading,
Within this water stirred and silver blades of love, place thy bonds,
and see thy chains removed.
I called out to the man, saying, "For what do you remove this plaque, that without it none will know to the place they've come?"
The man turned and said to me,
"No men come."
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