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You were born from the ruins that smothered my soul,
you picked up the pieces and saved what I know.
You captured the essence of the chain round my heart,
and turned all my feelings and dreams into art.
By my window I sit and wish on the stars,
Though my wounds are healed there will always be scars.
I have lost trust it now rots in my mind,
behind my eyes blood you will find.
The ink runs clear, lost to the dark,
like everything here it makes no mark.
The knife in my hand is Guided by you,
you control my mind heart and soul to.
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