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forgotten love? how could i be so dumb? i thought you were the one.
i cant get over you
all that we had planned
gone just like that
you have no idea how i feel
about you, me, and life
i saw you someday being my wife
now that i know we will never be
its just to hard to just let you free
i have nothing to look forward to
nothing to live for
its like i dont care anymore
when i go to iraq
i could care less if i ever make it back
i was so happy and excited
couldnt believe i had you
so perfect, sweet, most amazing girl, yeah you
i should've known it was to good to be true
maybe i took it to serious
i fell for everything you told me
but it felt so real
its unreal how some people can just change
forget everything like it never was
i wish i was one of those
someone like you
i wish it was true
that you feel the same as i feel for you
i would forgive you
you make mistakes too

i just cant believe i fell this hard and feel this way
im so mad, ashamed of myself
i make to many mistakes
i feel like im just a #### up
i never want to feel this pain again
i will stop it next time before it can begin
never taking what they say serious
i just end up hurting them and myself
we obviously never felt the same
right now i dont know who to blame
i cant just put you behind me
act like nothing was there just forget
i thought you were different
man how wrong i was
i took it all to heart everything you said
i cant get it out of my head
i thought we were going somewhere
i went to church again to thank God for you
i saw us to be forever
raising a family and the whole 9 yards
you said it too
how could i be so stupid
you got me crying for what
is forgiving someone for something so little so hard
you say your alright, happy feeling fine
when i first heard your voice i made a promise
i would never give up till you were mine
well i didnt and you were
now i dont know what to do
susan i think im in love with you

-PV2 Travis S

this is actually my first time writing poetry, i just needed to get it out somehow. i would like to know what you all think, is its good or a mess? thanks for taking the time to read it.

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how could i be so dumb? i thought you were the one. <br />
i cant get over you<br />
all that we had planned<br />
gone just like that<br />
you have no idea how i feel<br />
about you, me, and life<br />
i saw you someday being my wife<br />
now that i know we will never be<br />
its just to hard to just let you free<br />
i have nothing to look forward to<br />
nothing to live for<br />
its like i dont care anymore<br />
when i go to iraq<br />
i could care less if i ever make it back<br />
i was so happy and excited<br />
couldnt believe i had you<br />
so perfect, sweet, most amazing girl, yeah you<br />
i should've known it was to good to be true<br />
maybe i took it to serious<br />
i fell for everything you told me<br />
but it felt so real<br />
its unreal how some people can just change<br />
forget everything like it never was<br />
i wish i was one of those<br />
someone like you<br />
i wish it was true<br />
that you feel the same as i feel for you<br />
i would forgive you<br />
you make mistakes too<br />
<br />
i just cant believe i fell this hard and feel this way<br />
im so mad, ashamed of myself<br />
i make to many mistakes<br />
i feel like im just a #### up<br />
i never want to feel this pain again<br />
i will stop it next time before it can begin<br />
never taking what they say serious <br />
i just end up hurting them and myself<br />
we obviously never felt the same<br />
right now i dont know who to blame<br />
i cant just put you behind me<br />
act like nothing was there just forget<br />
i thought you were different<br />
man how wrong i was<br />
i took it all to heart everything you said<br />
i cant get it out of my head<br />
i thought we were going somewhere<br />
i went to church again to thank God for you<br />
i saw us to be forever<br />
raising a family and the whole 9 yards<br />
you said it too<br />
how could i be so stupid<br />
you got me crying for what<br />
is forgiving someone for something so little so hard<br />
you say your alright, happy feeling fine<br />
when i first heard your voice i made a promise<br />
i would never give up till you were mine<br />
well i didnt and you were<br />
now i dont know what to do<br />
susan i think im in love with you<br />
<br />
-PV2 Travis S<br />
<br />
this is actually my first time writing poetry, i just needed to get it out somehow. i would like to know what you all think, is its good or a mess? thanks for taking the time to read it. <br />

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