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Love you in the Rain
Walked by you in the rain,
and had to shed some tears...
You didn't know it was me,
it's been a few years...
but I saw you and still loved you,
I kissed you in my mind...
Hoping you might miss,
what you'd left behind...
Not once did you turn,
to see my face..
Thoughts that burned,
I've been replaced...
She holds your hand,
and breathes you in...
Now your her man,
I'm just a has been...
I sleep alone,I cry alone,
I just can't take it here on my own...
So I'll live with this pain..
and every chance I get ...
I'll walk past you crying in the rain...
Till the day you see,
that it's forever,it should be...
....YOU and ME....
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